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I was really looking forward to this animation.
I felt like this song was one of the funniest songs on the album, and it was really easy to visualize what they were conveying through the two characters. Unfortunately this animation depicts 3 characters (not including Notch) when clearly it's just a conversation between "A guy" and a "Creeper". This ruins the story. It looks like maybe you designed the third guy to look like Egoraptor which is nice fan-service, but not accurate. Aside from that, you also mixed up who is supposed to be singing the end part of the song, it is in fact the creeper who is supposed to be singing the end, it is when he's finally come to terms with being nice, so he is happy, but ends up not being able to control his explosion.
Furthermore, the creeper also looks only vaguely like a creeper, it would have been nice to see a re-designed creeper for your style, but this was too far from the original design. I want to say, honestly, that the animation is on par with other Starbomb videos I've seen. It was well done, and it was great to see some real frame-by-frame animation. Great work, but I am disappointed at the actual content.

P.S.

I actually feel like an ass for leaving this review, I used to make animations, too so I can only imagine how much work you put into this over the 2 months that you were making it, and I really see that.
What's even better, is that there are people like you who are willing to do fan services like this.
It is far more important, though, for me to be honest, and I hope you can appreciate the criticism. Even if you don't agree with me.

Freddy

obsu responds:

well SHIT

thank you for the review, its very much appreciated. trust me, you don't look like an ass. you gave your honest opinion, and that's great! i prefer people to focus on the negatives so that i can see what i've done wrong rather than be kiss-asses, it really helps me out a lot.
again, thank you so much! :)

I've been on newgrounds forever. I figured I may as well contribute my stuff to the site. So far I've just put up a few audio tracks. Some old ones I put up in 2004 which are still up, and some new ones from 2010. I love the forums!

Frederick Castelli @Fredman

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Binghamton N.Y.

Joined on 8/8/00

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