I was really looking forward to this animation.
I felt like this song was one of the funniest songs on the album, and it was really easy to visualize what they were conveying through the two characters. Unfortunately this animation depicts 3 characters (not including Notch) when clearly it's just a conversation between "A guy" and a "Creeper". This ruins the story. It looks like maybe you designed the third guy to look like Egoraptor which is nice fan-service, but not accurate. Aside from that, you also mixed up who is supposed to be singing the end part of the song, it is in fact the creeper who is supposed to be singing the end, it is when he's finally come to terms with being nice, so he is happy, but ends up not being able to control his explosion.
Furthermore, the creeper also looks only vaguely like a creeper, it would have been nice to see a re-designed creeper for your style, but this was too far from the original design. I want to say, honestly, that the animation is on par with other Starbomb videos I've seen. It was well done, and it was great to see some real frame-by-frame animation. Great work, but I am disappointed at the actual content.
I actually feel like an ass for leaving this review, I used to make animations, too so I can only imagine how much work you put into this over the 2 months that you were making it, and I really see that.
What's even better, is that there are people like you who are willing to do fan services like this.
It is far more important, though, for me to be honest, and I hope you can appreciate the criticism. Even if you don't agree with me.
thank you for the review, its very much appreciated. trust me, you don't look like an ass. you gave your honest opinion, and that's great! i prefer people to focus on the negatives so that i can see what i've done wrong rather than be kiss-asses, it really helps me out a lot.
again, thank you so much! :)
Exactly what you were aiming for.
Someone mentioned they thought the music was the wrong choice. i definately disagree with that, this is exactly completely what i would expect from the style he used. to me it felt very retro in alot of ways, and the choice of music really pulled the whole feel together. think back to the out of control anime styles if you've ever seen them, and this is very similar. i give you an overall of 9 JUST because you nailed the style.
This sucked pretty hard
With a good song, and you didn't even pick the best one, but with a good song, and one that has a lot of potential as far as a video or flash is concerned, you did a terrible job at portraying it. there was no point in probably 80% of the shit that was in that video. i think the only band member i saw in the whole thing was the damned bassist. the drummer wasn't even worthy of counting.
you should re-do this with more emphasis on the band mates and the actual song. the whole cock thing is cool, you could leave that in, but get rid of the phonse, get rid of batman, and get rid of all the nobodies that are singing in the damned song and replace them with bandmates. DO IT NOW!
I'M DETECTIVE JOHN KIMBLE!
The animation was well wasted. This may be one of the best animated, and LEAST funny things i've ever seen in my life. the crappy jokes just made me cringe. get together with a good script writer for your next one. you need someone who can actually write some good comedy. believe me it'll be alot better. and better voice actors too..
i actually made a pacman song that was similar a few months ago and at first i thought that maybe someone had taken my song. but nope, it's completely different. AND i'm also working on a flash cartoon for it as well haha. it's kindof funny that we both did the same exact thing. cuz mine's like a hard rock pacman song too. well good job, atleast u finished urs. i've been lazy.
actually the part where he pets the turtle and he says stop petting me is the LEAST funny part. maybe if he would have said it differently...overall pretty good though.
ok, now i liked the flash a little more than i do now, BEFORE i read the reviews. your attitude also affects the way people think about your animations. if you had just taken their reviews for what they were then maybe you'd get some more respect. and 24!!??! OMGWTF!!!24! sahhhhahahss. wut's wrong with 24? just because you're 13 (wich is damn young, like no hair on the balls young) doesn't mean that the majority of the people on newgrounds aren't in their 20's. now i suppose you're going to say "UR 19 D00d!?!?!"
now see what you did? i wouldn't have even wasted my time with this review if you were less bitchy.
P.S. when someone says "your layers are off a little, but other than that it's good, and i liked it" don't reply with "sha" it's rude.
and to the guy who said "next time RIGHT in english" maybe next time you should review in english. and i'll WRITE this review in english as well.
anyways, i'm pretty sure the whole point was for noone to understand what they were saying. you should make more.
it was alright
i didn't love it, i mean it was super corny. a snow flake that has words on it like someone typed that shit up. heh, ayways it was good artwork and whatnot. next time just make something that doesn't make me cringe cuz it's too corny.
This was awesome
but i feel bad for all those crappy flashes i submitted in the past. from now on i'll only submit things that i know won't get blammed. :)
RIP- all the helpless flashes out there that got blammed.
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